David SmithWhite

Rookie (270552 / Australia)

An Alternate Battle Hymn - Poem by David SmithWhite

To the tune of: The Battle Hymn of the Republic


Mine eyes are wide and whitening in the recess of the dark.
They are still and fixed and staring and will shine no more a spark.
In dread of merely dying has my life traced out it's arc,
Will death yet set me free?

Gory! Gory! War is murder!
The bridge of hope has lost her girders.
Oh Gloria, you should have heard her
Cry of misery.

I've been FBI and CIA, a gruff DEA narc.
In the jungles of Columbia I fought the fiercest FARC.
We employed the smart technologies in our hunting of the Snark.
And the game we played was war!

Gory! Gory! War is murder!
Gory! Gory! War is murder!
Gory! Gory! War is murder!
And peace our victory.

So we planned this operation as a fine stroll in the park;
We'd cut out the poisonous canker as the eagle doth the lark.
Though we stumble and we falter we will always leave our mark,
And write new history.

We'll impose the new world order where our bites' worse than our bark.
We will gamble with the future like a circling vulture shark.
We are all the common soldier in the hell-hole that's Iraq,
And that's the mystery.

Glory! Glory! How much further,
Can you wreck a country to convert her?
It's the same old story – yet absurder,
In this new century!

Gory! Gory! War is murder!
Gory! Gory! War is murder!
Gory! Gory! War is murder!
In this new century!


Comments about An Alternate Battle Hymn by David SmithWhite

  • Rookie - 65 Points Erhard Hans Josef Lang (6/27/2008 2:36:00 AM)

    I shall join in with you for singing this hymn of yours any good old daY! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Frank Cannon (4/12/2008 6:34:00 AM)

    Sung loud and clear David. Sing on! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 10, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, April 11, 2008

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