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(9 -21 / Thrissur (Kerala) / Vijayawada (A.P) , India)

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BE AROUND ME...

When will these storms of eerie silence subside?
I don`t know and so you be around me and absorb the terror
For I shudder and shake often.

When will these lightings of fossils of clouds wither away?
I don`t know and so you be with me and put your arms around me
For I cover my face with my fragile palms oftener.

When will these crowds of the deserted lands begin to hail at me?
I don`t know and so you be with me and hug me tight
For I feel lonely and am scared about a fairy hiding very often.

When will these distances between the rigid minds get shorter?
I don`t know and so you be treading with me
For my limbs get transfixed and paralysed the oftenest.

You are there my known devilish friend and guide
And that`s why I don`t stay with any unknown angels.
Leave me not, outrun me not and trail not behind me either
For my gossamer net has been woven around you.

Be around me, nay not that far where I have to search for you,
Be around me, nay not with a quiet mouth that does`nt suit you.
Be around me, my gossamer has to float like a wave of care and feel.

Submitted: Wednesday, January 09, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, January 09, 2013


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It is a poem addressed to a friend of mine who has often been my strength and support.

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  • Wahab Abdul (1/17/2013 10:19:00 AM)

    wow! very poignant..and deep, i like it

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  • Kanav Justa (1/16/2013 3:39:00 AM)

    wonderfully expressed, , , , , worth a 10

  • Heather Wilson (1/11/2013 4:44:00 PM)

    A true friend is worth more than money can buy, we never know when we have the need to call on them, or when they may need our help, a caring, lovely write.

  • Valerie Dohren (1/11/2013 12:55:00 PM)

    A very beautiful poem MD, you express so well the value of a true friend, and you are a lucky man indeed to have known such a friendship. Well done.

  • Valsa George (1/11/2013 6:18:00 AM)

    In the trials and tribulations of life, when one pauses undecidedly at the forking paths, wondering which way to choose, if there is someone close to stay with and give sound counsel, that will be the greatest blessing one can ever get in life! A beautiful poem with such warmth of feeling!

  • Unwritten Soul (1/10/2013 8:20:00 AM)

    What a beautiful poem, i adore this poem of its beauty honest and gentle message..truly best write in sincerest way you ever wrote. deserving 10. if people ask me what i going to vote_soul

  • Diane Hine (1/10/2013 6:35:00 AM)

    The support of someone who cares is worth more than anything else in life. This poems unfolds beautifully.

  • Vivek Tiwari (1/9/2013 10:38:00 PM)

    And in the mood of solitary sensation we yearn for such people whose standing beside is enough a support for whatsoever may be the reason pretence of boldness or love for each other yet there's a craving for being together.

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