Learn More

Crazy Eight


Coma


I'm never awake
I cannot sleep
I'm never aware
I've fell too deep

Into an abysm of
Sciolism and ridicule
Of those who misundestand
Or can't comprehend

INSOMNIA...

The decline of my mind
While in the motion of time
The slow motion of time
The illusions left behind

I can't close my eyes
I can't rest my mind
For a few minutes at a time
Searching for something cathartic

Why should I sleep
When I'm living my nightmare
My surmise that I keep
In my existance of despair

To stop the fucking dwelling
The grim, the mental swelling
On account of the morbid whispers
And the pathological murmurs

Dawn forgives all sins
Cures the enterprise within
All my senses are acute
Every answer comes with dispute

Why should I sleep
When I'm living my nightmare
My surmise that I keep
In my existance of despair

INSOMNIA
Its much to loud
INSOMNIA
Inoperable all around
INSOMNIA
I'm not fully aware
INSOMNIA
I'm not veritably here

Insomnia
Parasomnia
The Mania
Hypomania

Submitted: Friday, May 12, 2006

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (Coma by Crazy Eight )

Enter the verification code :

  • Rookie Esther Leclerc (5/12/2006 11:07:00 AM)

    An unusual and I think comprehensive take on the hated problem. I can't choose a favorite stanza, they all speak to me. Well-written! (Report) Reply

Read all 2 comments »

Trending Poets

Trending Poems

  1. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  2. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  3. I Am the Only Being Whose Doom, Emily Jane Brontë
  4. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening, Robert Frost
  5. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  6. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  7. Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night, Dylan Thomas
  8. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings, Maya Angelou
  9. A Child's Christmas in Wales, Dylan Thomas
  10. Warning, Jenny Joseph

Poem of the Day

poet Emily Jane Brontë

I am the only being whose doom
No tongue would ask no eye would mourn
I never caused a thought of gloom
A smile of joy since I was born

In secret pleasure - secret tears
...... Read complete »

   

New Poems

  1. Marcus Aurelius Rose, Lisa Jarnot
  2. Victoria Spivey's, David McLansky
  3. The Land, Marites C. Cayetano
  4. Touch and claim, hasmukh amathalal
  5. Sonnet: The Awesome Creator, Dr John Celes
  6. Sashay, Cee Bea
  7. Snakes are snakes always, gajanan mishra
  8. Sonnets Uncorseted, Maxine Kumin
  9. Sky, mina lotfi
  10. Where are my children, gajanan mishra
[Hata Bildir]