Wednesday, January 9, 2008

Darling Don'T Leave Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Autumn Leaves drift past my window
The summer has died away
The frost will soon be back
Winter is now coming soon
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JoJo Bean, Dodgy Dave and Meggie Gultiano
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Ewigi Liebe 12 January 2008

love stay although they are apart, cause love hold you together its doesnt mutter how far you are to each other..love will be your home and everytime you missed someone just look inside your heart cause you know in your heart you'll always find her/him. well penned thank you for sharing.

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Melvina Germain 10 January 2008

A delightful combination, all three synergistically flowing together as one. Very nice indeed. Melvina

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Duncan Wyllie 09 January 2008

Something in the combination of you guys that works, , I really got a lot from this one Thankyou for sharing it Love duncan X

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Sandra Fowler 09 January 2008

Three poets who make beautiful music together. Sorry I could not give each one of you a ten. Warm regards, Sandra

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Francesca Johnson 09 January 2008

Another piece of 'trioetry' for us to enjoy. Love it! ! Love, Fran xxx

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Linda Ori 09 January 2008

Isn't it amazing what can be accomplished through a combined effort of three like-minded individuals? This is hauntingly beautiful. Each verse similar, but with a distinct individualized style. A great production and a pleasure to read. Linda :)

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Alison Cassidy 09 January 2008

David, I'm delighted to see that this one is the result of a shared romantic imagination, not personal experience. Such a sad piece, filled with longing and regret. You three certainly know how to work together. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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