Ali Sabry

Rookie - 152 Points (11/8/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

Darling Every Time I See You All The Rays Of The Sun - Poem by Ali Sabry

Darling every time I see you all the rays of the sun are streaming through the waves in your hair and every star in the sky is taking aim at your eyes like a spotlight, The beating of my heart is a drum and its lost and it’s looking for a rhythm like you, You can take the darkness from the pit of the night and turn into a beacon burning endlessly bright, I've got to follow it cause everything I know now, Well its nothing till I give it all to you my lovely beauty princess, The important thing in all this is and I will say it in whole my life that you are my love and I don't have any thing except you darling in whole the world.


Comments about Darling Every Time I See You All The Rays Of The Sun by Ali Sabry

  • Rookie - 52 Points Walter C. Edwards (5/1/2015 4:53:00 PM)

    Very Sweet Poem Ali, full of your feelings (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Nausheen Zaidi (4/22/2013 3:11:00 PM)

    Loved it I never knew man can be so expressive and profound in love as much as you expressed beautifuly! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie The Pedestrian (12/24/2012 9:41:00 PM)

    Wow! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sheryl Belwa (8/6/2012 12:54:00 AM)

    taken from the song making love out of nothin' at all (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dark Infinity (7/26/2012 3:15:00 PM)

    Such a beautifully written piece of romantic poetry, great job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 21 Points Amy Marie (6/25/2012 6:30:00 AM)

    This is very romantic and expressive of your true feelings :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Neetha Sasidharan (6/22/2012 6:54:00 AM)

    ooohhh! ! ! ! so ccooolll...... so romantic.......true love......grt poem....u r a grt poet...i mean u explain things in a special way that brks through the readers mind....really grt...kp writing... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stormi Rockwell (12/29/2011 11:41:00 AM)

    It's very captivating and so romantic. Epic job! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 35 Points Heyyou Boy (12/27/2011 2:41:00 PM)

    From the heart. Written like a true poet. Nice job. Ali (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 27, 2011



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