Nick Andrew Smith

i really like this one a lot it talks to me when i read about it its a very good poem

This is a really good poems I really love it and understand it very well

You chose your words very well. Your poem touched me deeply. Thank you for sharing it.
It helps to read the words of another and feel as if they are yours as well. Very well done.

So I don't get it, who wrote this poem? You or AJ? Maybe I missed something. Its a good poem whoever wrote it.

very good put words love it, when i feel sad or broken i think wat if i well just kill myself but i dont because my baby bro needs me he count me as a mother to him lol and i love the poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The poem 'death' by 'Nick Andrew Smith' is about deaths aftermath.
The poem gives a description of how you feel after the death of a loved person.
From the beginning till the end the poem expresses the pain of the sitiuation
you´re in when you lose a loved person.
The poem uses an image of coldness and sadness to express the sad feelings that
are linked with the death.
The function of the image is to show how hard it is to handle the death of a loved person.
By the repeating of the word 'death' which introduces every line
and the use of short lines the tense atmosphere of the poem is emphasized
The poems consists of metaphors, paradoxons, personifications and repetitions.
An example for a used paradox is l.5 - 'Death is the call to heaven or hell'
is written. Heaven and hell are opposites that are given a common sense in this poem.
The same thing was made in l.6 - 'Death is an eternal mansion or cell'.
The metaphors are used like in every line. e.g. l.2 - 'Death is a sharp pain in my heart'
Personifications are used often - e.g. l.21 - 'Death lives inside of me'
Death isn´t able to live, so it´s a kind of paradox again.
There is also a development in the poem.
While in the first stanza the poet is writing about the death of other people
and how the dead lives in himself etc.
In the last stanzas he writes about the relation with the death and himself.
That the death is also going to get him. And in the last Stanzas the death got him.
By this all you get another image. An image of caducity.

Sorry for typing errors or grammatical errors

Very well done i love this poem i understand it in many ways \. Very powerful indeed all the way threw well done

That poem fits perfect with my feelings.....Beautiful & indeed very powerful poem