Sylvi Sylva


***eye Candy - Poem by Sylvi Sylva

My eyes green, smirky laugh, sated empty heart
You - enchanting, my eye candy, a soft glow
As you sleep, drawn, I trace god's work of art
My beloved ass, if you didnt know
Good for riding, ah but an empty space
Great for looking, oh but a vacant stare
Thats all you are, in more ways than a phase
Overwhelmed, I am, by night and seared by day
Oh God, you look good, for yet another grope.

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Comments about ***eye Candy by Sylvi Sylva

  • Rookie Ian Bowen (1/17/2008 8:12:00 AM)

    Most enjoyable read, and well written.
    Ian (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Bobbie Jean Wright (1/12/2008 12:17:00 PM)

    hehe...sweet tooth indeed! Loved this one! : o) Bj (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Francesca Johnson (1/8/2008 4:42:00 AM)

    A brilliant piece, Sylvi, with just enough detail to let us know what's going on. Some great comments below this one, too.

    Love, Fran xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie L. K. Thayer (1/6/2008 9:43:00 AM)

    great poem...I too know about the sweet tooth. thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Adeaze An (1/4/2008 6:43:00 PM)

    Totally true. Ten here.
    Kudos; ;
    Adeaze. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie William Jackson (1/2/2008 6:18:00 PM)

    Great poem. It reminds me of this.

    In the desert

    In the desert
    I saw a creature, naked, bestial,
    Who, squatting upon the ground,
    Held his heart in his hands,
    And ate of it.
    I said: 'Is it good, friend? '
    'It is bitter-bitter, ' he answered;
    'But I like it
    Because it is bitter,
    And because it is my heart.'

    - Stephen Crane (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ying Escalona (1/2/2008 6:13:00 PM)

    a stationary ball that travels faster than speed of light...it colors the world...isnt it amazing...close it and it will dark (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 2, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, January 25, 2010


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