Treasure Island

Ali Sabry

(11/8/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad / Kurdish From Kurdistan Region Of Iraq)

hurtful interaction


hurtful interaction

hearing last word from you was hello
my heart were betting fast was about to blow

my hopeless entertaining never brought me a smile into my face
I admit my failure in that race

new life with different taste dragged me
shameful manner for the rest of life hosts me

stand front of the ocean wave and saying goodbye
all heard from me was true and i never lie

listen to your heart and see the reality
compare me and see the quality

hope you like it.

Submitted: Monday, June 24, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, June 25, 2013

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  • Alookh (matin) (9/18/2013 4:17:00 AM)

    very well written Ali! i mostly like the last two lines;
    listen to your heart and see the reality
    compare me and see the quality :) thanx! (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (7/6/2013 4:22:00 AM)

    You are so right love can hurt sometimes.
    it is such a powerful emotion. Just like a volcano
    that erupts so is how love is. Full of power and
    sometimes very weak. Lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Annette Liliann (7/5/2013 2:33:00 PM)

    i see that you are developing as a poet. Nice poem. Keep on going. Hope you like it? i tell you, i like this poem so much. (Report) Reply

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