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Tessa Marshall
(5/3/2009 3:27:00 PM) |
It's not bad but I think this type of poem is really overdone...anyway it was really sweet :)
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billy homewood
(4/22/2009 7:41:00 AM) |
i dont realy like poems where the first word of each line is the same...
but this was realy good and had a great message keep it up
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Mona Martinez
(3/6/2009 3:14:00 PM) |
i loved the poem. so simple and yet striaght to the point. loved the way you ended, it was sooo true that life can be all of those things but, in the end you do gain yourself through life. great point of view.
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Jhon Fernandis
(11/5/2008 10:36:00 AM) |
very well written i like this poem this is very true
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Krista Churchill
(11/1/2008 2:13:00 AM) |
very true this is a nice written poem I love the set up and how well it is versed together. Keep writing and please take sometime to read some of my poems thank you so much..
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Jean Bocala
(9/2/2008 8:16:00 AM) |
hi...good piece...i like it...god bless my friend..
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