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9.1
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Lost in a world, that scares me to death,
Lost in a crowd I'm losing my breath,
Lost as a kid, lost as an adult
I feel everything is falling apart and its my fault
Lost as a person, cant find my way
Lost in life every day, Lost in worry
Who am I?
I've lived a Lie
Lost to Kindness,
Lost to Love
Lost in the sky,
Like a lonely dove
Lost in thought which I shouldn't do
It Winds me up,
I can't get through
Lost to comfort all kind words
Lost to advice that isn't heard
Lost to those who really care?
All these people always there
Lost in Me, I need a break
Lost in wonder which road should I take?
Lost in a place I don't know well
Where are you now? There's no one to tell
Lost here all alone To break these walls
Lost in mind
Lost in soul
Lost memories, there just a hole
Lost family, lost my place
Still yet I'm full of hate
Lost in boredom think I'll leave
There's a lot in life I need to achieve
Olivia Braun
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Comments about this poem (Lost To Find My Lot
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Olivia Braun
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Amy Nguyen (1/23/2012 7:33:00 PM)
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Did you get my message
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Debbie Cook (2/26/2010 2:10:00 AM)
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I love it. Thank you hun...
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Cass Vitale (11/6/2009 9:06:00 PM)
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This is amazing. thank you and keep writing.
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Derek Henderson (9/26/2009 10:25:00 PM)
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excellent poem expressing exactly how I'm feeling at the moment and written by someone who was fifteen at the time and I'm 52! !
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Zohri H (4/23/2009 7:39:00 PM)
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its really an amazing Peom, i think you feel guilty about something you never done.
you deserve 10/10
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Marshall Cline (1/15/2009 8:27:00 PM)
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I relate with this peace, I know the feeling of being lost and alone but still having so many around you. This shows much promise.
~Marshall Peter Cline II
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Chantel Weston (9/24/2008 12:13:00 AM)
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i think that this is amazing! ! i totaly understand it! !
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Greenwolfe 1962 (8/26/2008 11:38:00 AM)
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I'd like to recommend this but I gave it a 7 instead of an 8 because the writing isn't structured as well as it might have been. The problem here is not so much content as the presentation of that content.
GW62
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