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Loves Revised Notes

She never believed in love
That's all he has ever searched for
She thought she'll be happy enough
He always looks back before closing the door
She never cared enough for anyone
He cared way to much for his own 
She led her world, no matter who it rained on
He let his heart debt, even if it never owed

Her dad fled away
His dad took away
Her mom stayed 
His mom fade

Now he is heartless, and she cares so much 
He is in love, and she's in love 
The edged daughter, and the lost son
They bestow happiness in two emptiness,
Aging breathless, aiming deathless
Her pictures, his pictures... burning the sun
What magical things we find in us...

Submitted: Tuesday, June 26, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, June 26, 2012


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  • Rachel Streek (7/1/2012 11:36:00 AM)

    Great poem great use of words

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