sejal kapadia


Sky And Stars - Poem by sejal kapadia

I looked at the sky and counted stars,
Some dryness in hair and fallen few,
Counted them and thought of remaining
Started to count but how to?
No answer, no theory, no reply,
All crazy thoughts but eagerness to know,
Well countless objects and lovely creations,
As I am on earth as lovely human being


Comments about Sky And Stars by sejal kapadia

  • Rookie - 0 Points Siddharth Singh (11/3/2009 6:50:00 AM)

    This is a very sweet start for you on poem hunter.
    Keep going. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (10/4/2009 5:11:00 AM)

    MAY BE THEY ALSO LOOK AT US THIS WAY..A LOVELY SHORT POEM (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Surya . (7/30/2009 12:30:00 PM)

    well beautiful poem, beautiful imagination.voted10
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sameer Ahmed (7/17/2009 6:08:00 AM)

    Ralph Waldo says:
    ''If the stars should appear but one night every thousand years how man would marvel and stare''.

    If one is able to reach the skies and hold the stars then the whole of universe can be grabbed in palms which is what we call scientific exploration, yet, wer are humans on earth and nothing more and we lie pendent in the universe like a dot....10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,192 Points Hebert Logerie Sr. (7/15/2009 10:12:00 PM)

    This is a good start, keep on writing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (6/30/2009 9:16:00 PM)

    interesting piece /lovely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carol Gall (6/30/2009 9:46:00 AM)

    a lovely poem counting stars 10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,464 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2009 9:24:00 AM)

    I looked at the sky and counted stars,
    Some dryness in hair and fallen few, ... pse let meknow whencounting is over.....well deserved 10..

    read mine home bound, o.mother, papa do u know and papa u too (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 30, 2009



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