Lynzi Berner


You Get Angry - Poem by Lynzi Berner

You get angry
thats what death does
A light
A warmth on my face
The breeze through my hair
I smell the trees

You get angry
thats what death does
A heartbeat
A silent scream
Sinking
A coldness creeps in
Shadows dance in your eyes

You get angry
thats what death does
Not a death of the flesh
A death of the heart
The funeral of love
The welcoming of silence

Where you used to whisper...
I love you


Comments about You Get Angry by Lynzi Berner

  • Gold Star - 36,697 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/5/2006 1:57:00 AM)

    LYNZI...I LIKE THIS PARTICULAR WORK OF YOURS FOR ITS ABSTRACT
    DIPICTION OF LOVE LOST...STELLAR IMAGERY, EARLY ON IN THE WORK LEADING THE READER TO ASUME THAT IT IS HUMAN DEATH YOU SPEAK OF...DEFINED, WELL CRAFTED STRUCTURE...FINE JOB, LYNZI

    ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J, R, ~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''' (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 7, 2006



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