Only Yours

Soldiers don't run they observe and react...still nicely put though

Very sad, I like how well you captured the feeling of helplessness. Rate 10

my faince was in the army which the poems reminds me of

i like it, i know how this person feels about the solider coming back home because my dad was in the army so i know that feeling of such utter helplessness.10-10

When I was young, I was soildier. I was brave and good fihter.Yet I'm not old man.
My young comlade in arms died. I know the sadness. This poem's expression is good about young soldier. I read very well.

really emotional and very well written 10-10

That's really sad. I get the message and it's a great poem!

I really like this sincerly i alays wanted to go to the war but im too young and people say im gonna die but i want to get away from the war outside of my door and autully fight for a war thats for freedom