Viet Nam was my mentor. words make my veins run.)
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Rub my pot belly.
I smoke it, not poke it.
Why do you keep erasing what you post? ... Your poems still look to me like jokes. But yes, to each his own...: P
Utter randomness. How sad, when one resorts to mixing up the caps to 'Mike's Hard Lemonade/limeade' bottles, and posting whatever words so happen to turn up. Come back when you feel like TRYING to write poems, not random words.
Fred could be more but he is actually less.......pipe ipper =poem drip..
Your poems are beautiful. They're original, creative, thoughtful and ironic. and honestly I don't see why anyone would think anything else. Really; keep it up, Your making poetry history. Agnes
your work sounds like the words mumbled under the breath of a serial killer before they attack. and that's awesome. keep up the good work, any fan of free-association will gladly keep reading.
Personally I think 'fred' is one of Angie's alter-ego's. So sad!
fred I honestly don't know what to think about your poems. On one hand, they are less poetry then a satirical look at the modern world. I do tend to read everything that you have posted. I haven’t yet figured out how I feel about your poetry sometimes it makes me think other times I dismiss it as self indulgent. Yet somehow, I get the feeling that is exactly what you are looking to do writing more for your own enjoyment then for others, and honestly, there is nothing wrong with that. Keep writing and I will keep readin
Not sure what to make of your writes, or 2 line so called poems...maybe i am missing something? ? but its beyond me.