thanks to everyone helped me
thanks to everyone gave me an advice
without him may i get device
but the thanks turn to all of you
...
if you did your duty
you will taste the life's beauty
and if you wake on noise
be sure that you made a wrong choice
...
I will survive and open my gate,
i still alive with all my fate
there was a shad knoked my door
and i was sad when he burst my floor
...
They said: ’’if did your duty,
You will taste the life’s beauty
And if you wake on noise
Be sure that you made a wrong choice
...
In this life there is a rise and fall
And i know, i'm not alone at all
This life is like a ball
...
There is something i couldn't understand,
Something distroyed my day,
Something about my friend,
When he doesn't take my hand,
...
The life has no meaning
With out good feeling
From some one you care about him
Some one you love him
...
So mysterious univers
I need medicaments, may a nurse
It's so ugly, because there is a curse
Follows me like my perse
...
could life be worse than a friend stab you behind.......?
no, it couldn't.
and could you bear that exasperation of been blamed?
could you.......?
...
i still learninig english and day by day i will educate my self and i thought that this web site will help me to publish some of my written and if any one want to help me and give me the advice, i have an open mind to understand and i'm ready to learn from my mistakes.i know i still young and i have less experience but from you i will learn)
Thanks
thanks to everyone helped me
thanks to everyone gave me an advice
without him may i get device
but the thanks turn to all of you
cuz the day that you choose
to look at me,
gave me the hope that i longed to see
so, thanks to you too,
cuz by your reading to my poem
means that you receive my welcome
and i accept you to be my friend
so, i hope to give me always notes
thanks to everyone remembered and still remember me