Yes, i'll always love you.
After everythings said.
I somehow no matter what.
Havn't been able to get you off my mind.
...
Daylight fade so shade,
As life slowly fades away,
Simple plans go unspoken,
The love you felt disappears,
...
I'm Just A Girl..)
I'M Sorry
Yes, i'll always love you.
After everythings said.
I somehow no matter what.
Havn't been able to get you off my mind.
Don't know what i'll do.
So i'm sorry.
After all that i've done.
I didn't mean for this to happen.
And i don't even know.
How it began.
Hiya', I was just reading through your poems, they're amazing. You're really good. I can realte to a lot of what you write, I've seen or felt a lot of it myself. ALONE was my favourite out of all the one's I read.
Alone - Amazing poem but consider (to make it flow more and be easier to read) whereas in the first stanza every line ends in me, you could try that with all the other stanza's. eg: happy faces, smiling faces, lying faces just a suggestion hunn xxxx