Been through this before
I know how it goes
And again I'm on this road
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I am a young poet I've been writing for about 2-3 years I love writing poetry. I love getting messages and comments that contain hints tips praise and criticisms, I'm just trying to get better, I welcome it all from everyone. Please give me more! I have a poem entitled 'Poetry' if you take the time to read it, it outlines what poetry is for me. In a nut shell I wouldn't be who I am now with out it. But please by all means read it)
Together Yet Alone
Been through this before
I know how it goes
And again I'm on this road
Alone in a relationship
In my heart I feel alone
Still looking at my phone
When I know youve not called
Because I'm wishing you did
I pray these feelings to rid
We are supposed to be one
Yet two is our main number
Two very different to go further
I beg we end up on the same page
But its like we are in separate books
Seems the titles are just for the look
I can deal with being alone
But not when I shouldn't be
You have potential! Your poems have great expression and descriptions, occasionally ethic, great job! Write, read, and you will excel. Tiegan
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