Raabia Tabassum

Rookie - 21 Points (7th August 1998)

a bunch of flowers


i went to the tall grass
where the wind was blowing gently
it looked as if we were in heaven
but we werent
as i stood there
a man came and asked
what are you doing?
i said i was bowing
but now it had becum
so nice
what a nice weather
i stood there
looking at the nasty cat
she was very fat
i had nasty laugh
but again i was in the heaven
what a nice weather!
i stood there
looking at the trees
when my eyes faced
a beautiful bunch of flowers
i kept staring
it was fare
but i moved closer
and closer
when i saw i bunch
of jasmines
i smelled them!
what a beautiful smell
i was in the heaven again!
no one around
i only in the warm wheather
had the spring come! ?
i wondered
but as soon as i wondered
the weather changed
SPRING had came
i wouldnt blame
because the
bunch of flowers had
made my dream come true!

Submitted: Thursday, April 30, 2009

Form:


Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (a bunch of flowers by Raabia Tabassum )

Enter the verification code :

  • Rookie Abida Rahman (5/9/2009 6:26:00 AM)

    This was an amazing journey. It brought me back through childhood. I felt like I was flying back and looking down at myself in my old back garden... Really lovely! =D thank you for your tremendous writing, it felt so nice to read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ravinder Malhotra (4/30/2009 3:11:00 AM)

    Have you ever noticed your mother cook.... she takes the chicken, has it cut to pieces, marinates it, prepares the masala over a slow heat, puts the chicken into the masala along with condiments etc and then lets it cook till it is tender, and finally adds salt and pepper to make it palatable....OR does she bring it on to the dining table alongwith the condiments etc and calls its cusisine!
    Words are condiments, emotion the chicken, imagination is the slow flame...you have it all... Cook it so it may be called poetry! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rago rago (4/30/2009 3:05:00 AM)

    you have made me travel heaven........a beautiful write and eloquent presentaion. Fantastic write. (Report) Reply

Read all 7 comments »

Trending Poets

Trending Poems

  1. A Red, Red Rose, Robert Burns
  2. Address To A Haggis, Robert Burns
  3. To A Mouse, Robert Burns
  4. My Heart's In The Highlands, Robert Burns
  5. Tonight I can write the saddest lines, Pablo Neruda
  6. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  7. A Homage To The Freedom Fighters Of India, Raja Basu
  8. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  9. A Fond Kiss, Robert Burns
  10. A Man's a Man for A' That, Robert Burns

Poem of the Day

poet Christopher Marlowe

It lies not in our power to love or hate,
For will in us is overruled by fate.
When two are stripped, long ere the course begin,
We wish that one should love, the other win;

...... Read complete »

   

Member Poem

New Poems

  1. Riverside Sandwhich, Danny Draper
  2. Safe for a week in Hobart town, Danny Draper
  3. Jorg Schmeisser: Antarctic Prints Decemb.., Danny Draper
  4. Republic Day 2015, Jasbir Chatterjee
  5. Eternal Bed, Noah Body
  6. Musing on The March To Life 2015...(Grap.., Frank James Ryan Jr...FjR
  7. Paradise Found 2, Paul Butters
  8. Phyllis, Kim Barney
  9. Twilight, Mario,Lucien,Rene Odekerken
  10. Writer's Block, Paul Butters
[Hata Bildir]