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Dominated,
Overrun by power,
I have been defeated,
So why go on?
The power of depression,
Has left me weak,
I have been drained,
Drained of strength,
So let me sleep.
Depression overruns me,
I can’t hold on,
Inside we all feel lonely,
We’ve all been wronged.
The help I’ve received,
Failed,
I know I should give up,
Why keep going,
When all hope is lost.
You counsel me,
You lecture me,
You don’t understand,
This destroys me.
Depression overruns me,
I can’t hold on,
Inside we all feel lonely,
We’ve all been wronged.
Give in and just cry,
Cry out in the night,
Scream until you bleed,
Give the world a fright.
Emily E. Mehigan
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Thursday, June 28, 2007 |
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Thursday, March 17, 2011 |
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Comments about this poem (A Song to The Lost
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Emily E. Mehigan
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Ron Flowers (11/30/2008 2:59:00 PM)
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Very good poetry, Emily. I read your bio and, in spite of your problems, the winner in you shows through. Keep writing and keep looking up.
God bless you
Ron
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Colin Jeffery (11/27/2008 2:56:00 PM)
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A powerful poem from the Muse at its best.
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Frank James Ryan, Jr. (9/21/2007 11:56:00 PM)
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Emily, aside from a few vernacular changes...this is commendable work for a 17 year old writer...You have writing skills that are well worth persuing.You appear to have a strong suit in structuring right now...Don't pay any mind to unconstructive comments...Each poem you scribe, each day you write a poem...you will look back not so far down the road & you will marvel at the progress you've made...Be versatile, diversified....Read the work of many of today's Contemporary Poets, moreso, than our Classic Poets......And then adopt your own niche/style....Good Luck, young lady.
~ FjR ~
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