Vincent Kuo (04 April 1989)
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Break of Dawn
The world sleeps, silent and still
Lost in the memories of the yester-night
With hopes and dreams in a frozen chill
Still waiting to thaw with new light
I lay awake somehow, unable to rest
Trepidation like worms creep and crawl
They slither about in my tightening chest
Under a disturbed sleepless sprawl
The window panes seem furtively futile
As the outside landscape is black as coal
Only darkness to be seen for many a mile
Like the vacant depths of an abysmal hole
The deafening gloom envelopes my wits
Saturating all aspiring states of mind
It fills my head with empty pits
With only despair and dejection to find
Such awful darkness, such dreadful void
The blight is becoming too much to bear
All that's beautiful is slowly destroyed
To annihilation, no promise to spare
Then...gently…with a sort of tender kindness
The panes start to display an opaque veneer
To rid the world of its colour-blindness
Revealing the backdropp of the horizon sphere
Suddenly I feel a seed deep within me stir
A germination of some moving déjà-vu
The heavenly expanse seems to concur
And blends a cocktail of light purple-blue
The inner sprout begins to agitate
Provoking to escape the internal night
The landscapes now in a visible state
Flinging brighter colours into sight
Then...suddenly...an explosion of rays unfold
With the glorious light of the radiant Sun
Blasting the world in brilliant gold
And for a fleeting moment all seems done
It illuminates the landscape in a thousand shades
And all its magnificent pigments disclosed
It shears in a thousand beaming-blades
Chafing the worldly grunge exposed
My despair diminishes and washes away
The emptiness within me gradually filling
With renewed hope to greet the new day
My slumber is rid of the frozen chilling
Time stands still as I gaze towards the East
With the bright blazing warmth in my eyes
The intense rays like a mighty beast
Broke the darkest hours of my hopes' demise
The splendour of the new light upon my face
Revives, rejuvenates and invigorates my soul
Reminds me I'm alive! In Daybreak's grace!
Ready for a new fate, for today I am whole
Poet's Notes about The Poem
'It is always darkest just before the day dawneth'
If you enjoyed this poem, you are for sure going to enjoy my other poem 'Reawakening', written in more or less the same style with some similar underlying themes. However, 'Break of Dawn' can be seen as a more realistic parallel to 'Reawakening', in which I've incorporated some fantastical elements.
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I really like this poem.
I am so glad this poem recieve the recognition it deserves. Wonderful write.
an exceptionally moving and heartfelt write rewarded by being wonderfully written and very moving
Love this poem Vincent! Beautifully descriptive... Have a look at my poem called Dawn by Jinge Norvall.
Absolutely! you really beautifully nailed those silent thoughts and emotions of the between hours of waiting and hoping for sumptuous settlement... your praise of dawn is just so how i experience it myself....the first whistle of a bird announcing dawn is a moment that never ceases to make my heart lift... congrats on your member of the day and i can totally understand why with this write...
nice one vincent, well written, as i work nights i get to see the dawn on a regular basis, makes you glad to be alive.
A truly beautiful and professional write. I love the transition from before to after, and how the poem incorporates emotion with such a natural event. Just an all-around, touching, and enjoyable poem.
Well articulated, meticulous description of despair, hope
then rejuvenation through observation and depth of thought.
A brilliant piece of writing that needs to be read many times
to be fully appreciated.
The beauty is hidden in every stanza, when you try to explain every part of the dawn and the concurrent response of earth to the arrival of Sun light. Amazingly Superb.10 marks..
its on and on you go with imaging...and feeling....memorizing.....