Kelly Seale

Rookie (12-17-1958 / Norfolk, Va. USA)

'Breathtaking...' - Poem by Kelly Seale

I was watching the sunrise this morning...
As the stars faded, the bright blue-orange glow filled me with warmth on this coldest of October mornings,
and I felt part of something...
The way the large late October moon faded below the mountains in the West...,
As the sun rose above the Eastern sky, the mountains there alight with colorful hues that literally 'danced.'

I was happy, I was humbled.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Witnessed one of God's wonders... an everyday happening that we so often, take for granted. But this morning...
I noticed.

Comments about 'Breathtaking...' by Kelly Seale

  • Rookie - 0 Points teal Sky (11/26/2012 7:01:00 PM)

    Like other poets said, this poem is so well described that I can ' feel ' the poem.
    Thanks for making my morning great! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points teal Sky (11/26/2012 7:01:00 PM)

    Like other poets said, this poem is so well described that I can ' feel ' the poem.
    Thanks for making my morning great! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Poet Of The River (11/25/2012 6:09:00 PM)

    The world is a beautiful place for those whom choose to see it. Well written and well placed.10+ (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,055 Points C. P. Sharma (11/14/2012 2:09:00 AM)

    There is awesome beauty in Nature. But it needs an eye like yours that can appreciate it. I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (11/9/2012 2:24:00 AM)

    amazing i feel like i was watching it...thank you for making me feel wonderful sir you are great..

    thank you for sharing
    payal (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 58 Points King Big Head (11/7/2012 4:35:00 PM)

    I like it, a great poem. I get told I am breathtaking, and I have to agree I am breathtaking, I am the best poet
    in the world.

    Your King. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,448 Points Lyn Paul (11/7/2012 3:36:00 PM)

    Nicely written Kelly. These natural beauties are the reasons to wake and what keeps me driven. Thank You.
    Loved the words you shared with Kristina (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alla Simone (11/5/2012 9:19:00 AM)

    And I'm glad you noticed. Thanks for sharing. Excellent descriptions as usual. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Stevie Taite (11/4/2012 5:51:00 AM)

    A beautiful observation, and I feel as if I am sitting, cuddling my knees, by your side, seeing it through your poem! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,678 Points Valerie Dohren (11/2/2012 6:18:00 PM)

    Beautiful Kelly, great imagery. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,727 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (10/29/2012 7:42:00 PM)

    Nature is the great show to the eyes of livings! Nice and enjoyable! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Femi Oloidi (10/29/2012 11:45:00 AM)

    in one word: breathtaking! lol good and lovely
    kingfemi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (10/28/2012 11:00:00 AM)

    Yea nature puts a perspective on things like notrhing else, god given, free and beautiful. What a way to start the day, eh (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gabhriel Londe (10/27/2012 6:54:00 PM)

    Its amazing what we experience when we take the time to notice the world around us... What we find, what we learn, what we feel...
    Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,460 Points * Sunprincess * (10/27/2012 10:33:00 AM)

    wow this one has my favourites the sun
    and the moon..and I could visualize
    the painting God had created for you..
    so this one..fabulous! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 27, 2012

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