Theodora (Theo) Onken

Freshman - 840 Points (Washington State)

((( After The Rain))) - Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

I missed you the other day
When the dew left its diamond glitter upon the grass
And the squirrels and frogs were frolicking merry
When the silence of daybreak calmed
And the sunrise ever warmed
With its gentle rays dancing across my skin
Giving me hints of a fluffy white cloud or two
Promising an entire new day
Of peace and contentment
A perfect day-this
But for the glaring-almost blindingly-blazing
Absence of you


October 20,2010
Dedicated to: Renee Nicole (Rainspirit)


Comments about ((( After The Rain))) by Theodora (Theo) Onken

  • Gold Star - 31,288 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/21/2015 9:29:00 PM)

    A sweet poem with a nice stylish description. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,681 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (6/15/2015 11:01:00 AM)

    Beautifully presented my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,521 Points Bernard Snyder (6/11/2015 12:46:00 PM)

    I like the imageries! Well-worded poem. Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,905 Points Tushar Ray (3/17/2015 9:48:00 PM)

    A very rare and great poetic expression of sadness and gladness together; both being the expressions of love. I enjoyed very much. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,681 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (12/15/2014 10:31:00 PM)

    A compelling and creative composition that as simply beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,515 Points Savita Tyagi (12/15/2014 11:35:00 AM)

    Lovely poem. Love supersedes the charm of nature. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,521 Points Bernard Snyder (12/15/2014 11:29:00 AM)

    Very, very nicely said. Great imagery! Congrats! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,852 Points John Richter (12/15/2014 7:46:00 AM)

    Very poignant.... Delicious ending thought (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (12/15/2014 2:11:00 AM)

    A nice poem with pearl like words- I missed you the other day When the dew left its diamond glitter upon the grass thanks and congrats for the selection as poem of the day (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,045 Points Rajnish Manga (12/15/2014 1:58:00 AM)

    Even when the nature was happy to sower its bounties all around, the absence of a loved one makes it immaterial to us. Thanks for this beautiful piece of poetry. Congrats for 'Poem of the Day'. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 824 Points V P Mahur (3/11/2014 4:02:00 PM)

    Dear Onken
    I agree with you. The absence of loved one makes even a good sight ugly.

    'Swing of Spring'
    The soft swing of fresh air
    Has brought joyous glare
    Moist with drenching love
    Engaged in the idol affair
    ............................
    ......................
    I want to share this poem with you.
    full of it you can find on my page. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,824 Points Wahab Abdul (11/4/2013 12:24:00 AM)

    fantastic poem, nice flow, good use of words charged with emotion.. love it...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 445 Points marvin brato (9/24/2013 4:02:00 AM)

    Mother nature nurture living things, same manner it deserves! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 840 Points Theodora Onken (8/5/2013 7:27:00 PM)

    Roseann,
    Thank you dear for your kind words. This poem was originally a dedication to a poet friend of mine who passed away. Her name was Renee but she went by the name: RainSpirit. My writing has come to an abrupt stop as illness has messed with my muse. Am hoping that i can once again overcome - if i am blessed - then i will be back!
    Best regards,
    Theo (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,046 Points Roseann Shawiak (8/4/2013 2:39:00 AM)

    Love how you used nature throughout - I think in pictures and your poem fit right in my mind. Final line zapped me with absence of you. Can totally identify with what you're saying. Your emotions are very well expressed. Keep writing. Look forward to reading more of your poetry. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,888 Points Patricia Grantham (3/25/2013 11:19:00 AM)

    Nature have a way of making us think about life. After the rain there is a calm that comes
    over us. Love has that same effect when it comes also. Thanks for the thought. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,901 Points Ken E Hall (6/16/2012 7:00:00 AM)

    Parting is such sweet sorrow and nothing can make...but oh wait absence makes the heart grow fonder, very nice to read...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Whisperkwane Lamb (10/24/2011 3:45:00 AM)

    Theodora (Theo) Onken thanks for knowing I was not...I will and you...are at starlite cafe? I was reading this poem 'After The Rain' sad but true (nature) has it's way of making you think better concerning another person when you are face to face with (her) ...I feel that way when just sitting and watching the birds interact, like people at times, (lol) ...you are very emotional and that is good...keep sharing yourself....you open eyes...and warm heart...mine for sure... (Report) Reply

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