Audrey Perniciaro

Rookie (July 24 / Long Island, NY)

Confused - Poem by Audrey Perniciaro

Do you ever feel confused,
Like, somehow you don't belong?
Do you ever feel used,
Like, an over sang song?

Sometimes I wonder
Why I'm here on earth
Sometimes I despise
This place I've known since birth

But then I see the sunset
In all it's golden glory
And I know I need not worry
For God is writing my story

Comments about Confused by Audrey Perniciaro

  • Rookie Sweet Seven (11/10/2005 10:54:00 PM)

    lovely poem! keep the faith! =) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Charles Chaim Wax (11/10/2005 6:56:00 PM)

    of course
    there's no place else to be
    but on this twirling planet
    set dancing by a Great Power
    which you have felt in your heart
    and so well expressed
    in this lovely poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ***** ********* (11/10/2005 6:17:00 PM)

    Audrey, nice little poem. Life i full of mystery and confusion, so, this typo on 1st line 'confused' is quite apt. 8 from me Smiling Tai (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 10, 2005

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 23, 2006

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