Sunprincess


Fishes In A Sea Of Love - Poem by Sunprincess

happily in a sea of love little fishes of ocean blue swam
fishes of tropical colours so beautiful and so bright
these bright little fish love to ask questions of their mom
fishes of tropical designs so beautiful in the light
swimming in this sea so peaceful, this sea of love
underneath blue skies and those warm sunrays above
the brightest little one is spending time with his mom
on this day when everyone swims together so cheerfully
the brightest little fish swims gailey with his mom,

and little bright fish says, ma
together we swim in a sea of love
so happily under a blue sky above
never we fishes harm each other
yet i see humans kill their brother
little fishes mom says to her son so curious,
my son since the beginning of time
many humans have committed this crime
and the brightest little fish shook his head
and away he swam to play with his friends
and live happily ever after, swimming in a sea of love!


Comments about Fishes In A Sea Of Love by Sunprincess

  • Gold Star - 9,313 Points Daniel Brick (5/2/2014 4:20:00 AM)

    Your poems keep alive and thriving that vision of paradise which persists generation after generation. Only cynics want to disown such a vision, probably because they've had negative experiences and become bitter. It doesn't have to be that way. As you show in this poem, when the young fish asks his mother about the harsh realities, she doesn't lie to him, she tells him the truth. But he still carries the dream within him at the end, it just has to share a place in his psyche with the harsh realities. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 27,112 Points Akhtar Jawad (4/18/2014 7:16:00 AM)

    the brightest little fish swims gailey with his mom,
    The bright little fish must be carefree and happy with her mom. I wish her more happiness. A lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,541 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (2/8/2014 5:33:00 PM)

    Sea of love
    Blue sky above.
    Nice setting for a beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rishabh Bidya (2/7/2014 6:43:00 PM)

    Suits the valentine season! ! ! : D (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,480 Points Valsa George (2/4/2014 7:39:00 AM)

    Little fishes swimming in a sea of love! Let they be safe and happy in the shark infested waters of the sea! ! How these cute creatures with fins interest us! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (2/4/2014 12:47:00 AM)

    sweet ink dear..! !

    Heartfelt (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,063 Points Kanav Justa (2/3/2014 11:11:00 PM)

    sea of love, , , a wonderful poem, , , , , the beauty of nature seen in your poems is great, , , , very nice work (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 3, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 4, 2014


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