one apple, two apples, three apples, four
give me an apple, and i’ll love you even more!
one orange, two orange, three orange, four
give me an orange, and i’ll ask you for two more!
apples and oranges, let’s have some fun, let’s compare
and for this contest we gotta make it fair!
red delicious apples are yummy, and so very sweet
crispy, or crunchy, they are my favourite treat!
so perfect, and so juicy, delicious oranges are so sweet
seeded, or unseeded, oh yes, I love this treat!
apples and oranges, are both a delicious yummy fruit
both can quench your thirst, if turned into a juice!
apples and oranges, are a perfect fruit, in a picnic to share
especially with your true love, to show you really care!
apples and oranges, which is the winner of the prize
eat them both, if you wish to wear a smaller size!
apples and oranges, are both healthy, and full of fiber,
experts say, eat them both, so you can be a tiger!
Dear Sunpriness, I read and appreciated this poem very much. I know you don't understand Urdu (National Language of Pakistan, widely spoken in India as well) but I have translated it in Urdu for my grand children. I hope you shall enjoy reading the translation. For understanding it just read your poem again.
Wow! we need not to go any where. all types of treatment available here. indeed poetry is remedy of all disease and 100% true. Congrt our doctor poet no poet doctor. moon n stars are getting us bore. i solely appreciate your contribution. i was searching some funny poem.10 ++++
Tiger I am, I roar like a beast! Fruit, full of sugar will grow yeast! : -0 poetry is an itch, but somebody has to deal with it; -)
I love this very pleasant poem Enjoy the juices Healthy and delicious
apples and oranges, are a perfect fruit, in a picnic to share especially with your true love, to show you really care! beautiful poem shared great 10++++++++++
It is a nice poem. A healthy poem for our healthy body system.
Eat them both and.be a tiger. Well done my friend
what a poem, it's amazing Rachel...... Both are sweet with juices in One by squeezing and other to bite. If one fulfills the other brings sunshine. apple and orange a royal combine..........................
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a wonderful poem - it's so full of joie de vivre - and I especially like the long lines that are fleet and mercurial. it's important that this kind of poem of appreciation doesn't drag and your lines fairly fly off the page. And you buried a few themes among the fruits, for example, the reference to sitting with your TRUE LOVE and sharing the sweetness of the fruit in the sweetness of their presence. This poem really connected with your readers as the comments prove and one of them promises a gift of oranges from India. What a special reward for making the effort of writing poetry!