Amy Louise Kerswell

Rookie - 10 Points (4/6/87 / Bath)

God It Hurts - Poem by Amy Louise Kerswell

I said 'God it hurts'
And God said 'I Know'
I said 'God I cry alot'
And God said 'That's why I gave you tears'
I said 'God I get so depressed'
And God said 'That why I gave you sunshine'
I said god I feel Alone'
And god said 'That's why I gave you loved ones'
I said 'god my loved one is dead'
And God said'I watched mine nailed to the cross'
I said God 'Where are they? '
And God said 'Mine is on my right and yours is in the light.
I said 'God it hurts'
And God said 'I know'


Comments about God It Hurts by Amy Louise Kerswell

  • Gold Star - 9,176 Points Allotey Abossey (7/26/2015 8:43:00 AM)

    Very witty and beautiful. Good work (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 707 Points Jennie Dunne (7/6/2015 4:42:00 PM)

    In this poem...i see your side, Gods side and the truth...the truth being that God is love...a beautiful poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,744 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (5/17/2015 5:20:00 PM)

    A towering tower of theraphy my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,480 Points Bill Galvin (3/3/2015 2:52:00 AM)

    Amy, thank you for this. I just lost my wife of 32 years. I now know what you were going through. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,388 Points L. E. O. Gibraltar (1/20/2015 12:24:00 PM)

    This short piece encompasses tragedy irony drama, comedy, not the least a beautiful ending. A great poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michael Silver (7/12/2012 1:21:00 AM)

    This is great. It really made me think. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Patrice Smith (7/18/2010 8:08:00 AM)

    I really enjoyed this poem, it provoked a lot of feelings and realizations. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelli Poteat (5/1/2010 9:25:00 PM)

    i love this poem. it really moved me, i guess its because im going though alot but i love this. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zoe Nekoofar (4/26/2010 11:01:00 AM)

    dear amy its a good poem,
    but im a muslim, of course we believe in the same God but...
    in our religion we dont believe that jesus is his son, we do believe hes a prophet just not Gods son.
    we believe that God doesnt need any family or friends, because he made us all and everything else thats around us. he has control over everything and everyone.
    we believe that the more pain we go through without losing faith in God the better we'll get in the next worlds: (heaven, hell) .
    of course you may think im a bit dum or unable to understand many things cuz im a muslim but we think differently and over all your poem was great and i enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Yamuna M Nambiar (4/21/2010 8:47:00 AM)

    Its a poem with a heart with God at the core of it...Good work... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ema B (11/3/2009 4:46:00 AM)

    I LOVE this poem!
    Your a fantastic poet
    keep going! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Digna Gomez (9/19/2009 1:34:00 PM)

    don't stop writing! ur a gud writer! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ♫ ♫ (8/19/2009 9:28:00 AM)

    woww! ! this just says how much God loves us..this reminds us to thank God for giving his son for our salvations. amazing poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ashley Mejia (8/1/2009 10:31:00 PM)

    I have always loved this poem...like since i first read it. i even drew it out for my art class when i first read it. i gave you credit tho lol. anyway awesome poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jesus Is the Way, I love you God. (7/10/2009 11:00:00 PM)

    I loved your poem. I really needed to hear that because i am hurting very much and i have no one to talk to about my problems except for the Great Creator, God. Thank you for this poem it is very moving to my soul right now and forever will be. (: (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Adonay Rosete (6/27/2009 2:18:00 PM)

    I loved this poem is what I tell GOD everyday because I lost my daughter in Jan this year she was 11 by a hit and run she was crossing the st.My friend u are in the right track with GOD u fear nothing when u have him and only he knows my pain I ask why me? He says 'ur not alone, I lost mine too but gave use all eternal life'. I thank him for that and soon I will see my Ashley again. GOD bless u and urs....... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Angel Wings (4/19/2009 6:29:00 PM)

    this is one of the best poems i have read in awhile it has alot of good meaning to it thank for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lindo Mvelase (4/17/2009 4:05:00 AM)

    that is a very nice poem. thank you sister. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kiga Aaron (3/31/2009 8:26:00 PM)

    I Loved It!
    U should be an inspirator
    or something (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zachary Stewart (3/12/2009 5:33:00 AM)

    This poem really helped me. Thank you so much!
    It is a great poem! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 6, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, March 2, 2012


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