Treasure Island

Theresa Quinn


Haiku - Approaching Storm


Sullen horizon
Ebon ashen silver white
Indecisive Earth

Submitted: Friday, February 01, 2008
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  • Michael Pruchnicki (2/1/2008 12:42:00 PM)

    To haiku or not! That's the question, right? Seventeen syllables are OK!

    oak leaves flutter
    sunlight fails
    raindrops
    patter

    Let the reader make up his mind as to 'indecisive earth.' After all, the earth in your haiku is a bit more abstract than what a haiku calls for, which should be an
    image or fleeting emotion, I think. (Report) Reply

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