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Raveendran . (12/25/2008 9:25:00 PM)
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Past, realistically(pictorially) rendered in the language of poetry
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James Foulk (11/24/2008 2:44:00 PM)
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a very touching and heartfelt piece of lovely poetry. thank you for reading a lonely leaf and a bumble bee at work and for your kind comments.
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Meggie Gultiano (11/14/2008 4:43:00 AM)
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a very touching piece..So sad, the family never cared for this person called Madge
thanks for this treat.
Love,
Meggie
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Sandra Fowler (11/11/2008 12:30:00 PM)
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I wonder if Madge knew she was so poem worthy?
Sometimes tells me she would have appreciated
your gift of words. Lovely work.
Always your friend,
Sandra
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Rebel Heart (11/9/2008 10:38:00 AM)
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Time, place and pathos form the backdropp to this wonderfully nostalgic tale - your characterisations are second to none Allie. What makes this one so three dimensional is the emotion and the delightfully direct but nonetheless magical phrasing that defines your poetic voice. j xx
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (11/9/2008 12:26:00 AM)
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Sweet memory lane flashing back our fabulous moments with our once great pal.Yeah I can feel the loss you'd bore my dear Ally.May her restin' in peace! Amen.
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Ivan Donn Carswell (11/7/2008 3:07:00 PM)
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It must have hurt a bit to write:
‘Madge… (she liked me to call her that)
You look just like a girl -
from the back.’
It came from a mixture of powerful emotions which you illustrate so well with modesty and deference... Rgds, Ivan
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Reshma Ramesh (11/3/2008 7:45:00 PM)
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hmmm....yet another neat write abot those who have touched our lives.......well penned and keep writing
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Andrew Blakemore (11/1/2008 4:48:00 AM)
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What a wonderful story Alison, full of pathos. It's a story all too familiar these days when the old are left alone without contact from their family. Thank you for sharing. This is certainly one to keep. Love, Andrew x
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Sathyanarayana M V S (11/1/2008 3:26:00 AM)
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Good friends last few days it seems.......very well written with all needed poignance and pain........
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