Ali Sabry

Rookie - 140 Points (11/8/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

-((Letter For My Lovely Beauty Lady)) - - Poem by Ali Sabry

Dear My Darling.

I Remembered You Again Yesterday & I Need You By Force This Time…….

Yesterday I was walking in the street lonely a suddenly I saw a shadow running to me suddenly, This shadow was your picture it was you simply, Oh my darling you changed so much & you now have more beauty more than the past cause your beauty is increasing every day more & more my god bless you & protect you in whole your life, Honey let's try to fix our troubles that happen with us maybe we can solve them & we come back home again, I know all the faults was from me but you must to forgive me, You can see me now whole these years I'm alone, Every day I was waiting for your calling & see your number in the telephone but I didn't resave any call from you, Here I'm now honey in front of you asking you to forgive me at the end again & I'm ready to sleep outside in front of your home door under the snow & rain waiting for your forgive, Please my lovely lady I waste whole my life for you why you left me alone for a tiny thing is not necessary, You know when I walk in the street I see your pictures in all the time everywhere I hear your voice & I can smell your fragrance that I bought for you from the first time we met, Honey you mean to me the whole world, You are my other half & my soul twin don't forget this, I hope you will understand my situation & you will do the right thing for me, With my best regards for you from all my heart with my big hot kisses for you.

Sincerely
Your Lover Forever In Whole Your Life
The Romantic Man
Ali Sabry


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I Remembered You Again Yesterday & I Need You By Force This Time…….

Comments about -((Letter For My Lovely Beauty Lady)) - by Ali Sabry

  • Rookie - 22 Points Sasidharan Vellat Menon (11/19/2012 3:02:00 AM)

    nice way of expressing your mind in your style of writing (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Stevens Cadet (10/22/2012 5:10:00 PM)

    Smooth, if this was really for someone, this is going to make her appreciate you more (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,187 Points Xelam Kan (10/19/2012 12:28:00 PM)

    still way to get hold of words n structure
    b4 composing weigh your words as per your expessions
    the more your diction sublime the more you can turn readers mind...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 106 Points Alade Idris (10/14/2012 7:22:00 AM)

    I like your epistolary type of poem.good work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vikrant Jog (10/3/2012 9:30:00 AM)

    You just hit a perfect string... Facing the same trauma lately... Hail to you... liked it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ty Hernandez (10/2/2012 6:27:00 PM)

    That was amazing. Some word's that were said connected/related to me in so many ways. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Jaqualen Roberts (10/2/2012 1:32:00 PM)

    Powerful words spoken touched my heart (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carli Lovell (10/1/2012 1:27:00 PM)

    hi i thought that was beautiful and your lady has to be blind not to see what u think about her god bless u guys. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Saroj Kanta Maharana (9/30/2012 7:54:00 AM)

    Hi Dear Ali - Sincere love never goes waste they say, Insallah she will be with you soon. full of passion.. good work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mohamed Foday Kamara (9/28/2012 1:52:00 PM)

    Wow!
    What a lover?
    Incredible!
    Good work indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Venky Venkatesh (9/26/2012 2:24:00 AM)

    Hi Ali,
    i appreciate your feelings and trust me your lady will be back with you soon. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Venkatesh Davangere (9/24/2012 8:50:00 AM)

    nice work, let ur emotions be sharp., .and i expect more noblity frm u my friend. You iraq peoples are more thouts worthy. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie So Close (9/24/2012 3:08:00 AM)

    hi ali, its a very good work...and you i understand how precious your love to you....and lets hope your darling will come back to you.

    »so close« (Report) Reply

  • Rookie So Close (9/24/2012 3:07:00 AM)

    hi ali, its a very good work...and you i understand how precious your love to you....and lets hope your darling will come back to you.

    »so close« (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Poppa Yao (9/23/2012 7:16:00 AM)

    Nyce! You are a hopeless romantic....lucky you it can be felt in your poetry. Beautifull (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Laura Wilson (9/22/2012 9:24:00 PM)

    So much longing, hope and fear can be felt in this piece nicely done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie irene Mbula (9/22/2012 6:12:00 AM)

    Touching! ! ....wish it was specifically directed to me......oops! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,433 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (9/9/2012 2:18:00 AM)

    Wow a nice romantic poem. Nice to see an iraqi bro poet. Im indian. Pls do cment on my poem as im new here. Thanx n God bless. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Aung Si (9/6/2012 12:02:00 AM)

    Wonderful! I appreciate this. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anamika Goswami (9/4/2012 3:51:00 AM)

    Keep your hopes up... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 26, 2012



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