yoonoos peerbocus

Rookie (05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

A Glimpse Of Taj Mahal - Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

Wonderful is not so much
The mausoleum's chisel cut beauty
As the beauty of the love
Arrested in its architecture-
Starry white dome in starry space
Ray lit clouds set aglow

Fairer than the sky, akin to third eye
Visitors' mind illumine with cosmic bliss
As night snuffs asleep.
What's bricked up looking glass
Dawn sunpolishes
Till Jamuna's surface looks back

Hallucinating but still real.
There's in it no beauty
That's not surpassed in beauty
By beautiful carved adage
Till earth wears out love like theirs
Suffuses this world wonder sarcophagus.


Comments about A Glimpse Of Taj Mahal by yoonoos peerbocus

  • Rookie Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (9/12/2012 9:38:00 AM)

    The Taj at Agra in India is a monument that speaks volumes about the hapless thousands who toiled and perished in the process and it stands out as an image of hypocritical dimensions far fetched from the real angles of love between an emperor and his wife. The poem points finger at the evidences of many disastrous acts of human folly. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 14,311 Points * Sunprincess * (8/31/2012 8:36:00 PM)

    A beautiful building...but a sad story for the architects and builders...my heart goes out to those poor souls. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Padma Devkota (8/15/2012 5:39:00 AM)

    Wonderful is not so much
    The mausoleum's chisel cut beauty
    As the beauty of the love
    Arrested in its architecture-
    Beautiful insight... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Rohit Sharma - - Working on my book (7/16/2010 12:27:00 PM)

    Being an Indian..I am proud of this poem...and I am really thankful for expressing it so beautifully...Cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Will Althen (7/13/2010 6:56:00 PM)

    You do a great job of expressing the beauty that can't be expressed in words. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,899 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (7/6/2010 12:02:00 AM)

    1] Fairer than the sky, akin to third eye / Visitors' mind illumine with cosmic bliss

    Support the artistic work which could be more precious than the heaven. Sometimes. But sometimes may be the dream of whole civilization.

    2] Hallucinating but still real.

    Beautiful. The ambiguity of visual art depicts the eternity.

    Yes, it is Taj Mahal Revisited by the human eyes which illuminates the light of infinite.

    Regards,
    10++++
    pranab (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (4/25/2010 6:12:00 AM)

    Dear Yoonoos,
    i lliked so many expressions in this poem
    akin to third eye... do u believe in a third eye?
    illumine with cosmic bliss
    beauty of love arrested in architecture.
    do u know i read a lot of ur poems. thank u
    i would like to listen to your comments and critic on my poems. Thank you. God bless you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 57 Points Alek Lenth (4/8/2010 12:11:00 PM)

    This may still be my favorite of yours. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vandavasu Vittal (3/6/2010 9:54:00 PM)

    Your poetic description of our love's representative monument is diligently and opulently done sir. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Patrick A. Martin (10/8/2009 11:42:00 PM)

    Thank you Yoonoos for taking me back to my youthful days. I found myself standing in front of the Taj in 1978 all over again. Paddy 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rahul Sharma (9/27/2009 10:26:00 AM)

    BEAUTIFUL AND I WANT YOU TO WRITE SOME NEW POEMS PLEASE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maria Barbara Korynt (9/2/2009 11:07:00 AM)

    Beautiful written.Every your poem is interesting. I am reading with pleasure.(10v) .
    Maria Barbara Korynt (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Kafil Uddin Raihan (7/27/2009 11:36:00 PM)

    Well depiction of the beauty in a poetic eye sir, cheers with 10++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 28 Points Denvor Fernandez (7/23/2009 6:45:00 AM)

    Good discription (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 50 Points Tara Chettur (6/9/2009 11:26:00 PM)

    as the title goes..its a visit to tajamahal for a moment i felt i was there besides yamuna... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Irene Clark-hogg (5/10/2009 11:49:00 AM)

    Renamed Your Taj revisited. I have returned to read once more this beautiful description.
    Irene (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Subroto Chatterjee (4/11/2009 12:35:00 AM)

    While reading this poem my mind's eye looked at the vision I say some years ago when I visited the Taj. Your poem conjures some beautiful images and memories. Good as always.
    I'd like you to read through two of my poems: 'Twas Not A Rose', and 'One Day in The Life of Ivan Gesticulatovich'.

    Cheers.
    Subroto. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Martyres (3/23/2009 8:08:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem about a beautiful monument dedicated to love....10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 23 Points Jim Norausky (2/22/2009 4:39:00 PM)

    Masterfully written regarding structure and history. One only has to see it to be in awe. Jim (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nitin Suresh (2/13/2009 11:27:00 PM)

    way to go yoonoos..the ethreal beauty of taj mahal has been brought well in those lovely interplay of words (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 26, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 20, 2012


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