Midnights Voice

Freshman - 1,055 Points (November 3,1950 / Selma, Alabama)

Monkey and Goose, Snake and Bull, and Tiger Lou

Monkey and goose
Snake and bull
And there friend tiger lou
Met at hummingbird's garden
For afternoon tea for two

In hummingbird's garden
Raised the most precious colors
Be they red or blue, pink or white
To all who viewed
It was such a dazzling sight

Somewhere between succulent sips
The question of God's existance
Became more than a quip.
Where is it that God can be found?
Is he here upon Earth's holy ground?

Then goose said, 'I will fly across
This land, my wings are strong and
When it comes to tiring, I have no end
From high away I can see, so please
For certain, I am the one to send.'

Monkey said, 'I can swing from
Tree to tree all day long
So high that I can see
Every aspect of the land
So if anyone goes, let it be me.'

Snake said, 'I will slither, I will crawl
Across the swamp, across the bog
If this God exists surely
I will be the one
To bring back a certainty

Bull steps in as to be not excluded,
'I will cross the plains from end to end
I will search from dawn to dawn
If there be such a place
It will be found by me on Earth's green lawn.'

Tiger steps up with a growl,
'I will go searching in the fields of rice
I will go where the sugarcane grows
I will not stop, so cast my lot,
When I come back, it will be told.'

Then they left, each on a separate road
And they would be gone for many a day
But then there came to pass
Goose and monkey, snake and bull, and tiger lou
Met at hummingbirds with finished task

Goose said, 'I have found God
And I know the only way.'
'Say hey, ' said the monkey, 'for you are all wrong
Through the woods have I found God
It's through the woods all day long.'

'Nay, ' snake had to say, 'I found God
And only I know the way.
Across the swamp, I'm here to state
Is the only way to him
Anything else is tempting fate.'

Bull bellows most loudly of all
'You fools, I have searched for days and days
It's across the fields of grass
That you must go to God
All of your remarks are so crass.'

Tiger lou darkened his eyes,
'Idiots! the devil has fooled you all
If you seek God, I and only I know the way
To show you let me say
So appoligize or step back away

Then there was a viscous roar
Monkey strangled goose, snake bit monkey's knee
Tiger bit snake in half, then bull flung tiger
High into the sky, breaking his back with a crack
Bull burst his heart with such strength, didn't linger.

Hummingbird in her garden was saddened
Began humming and humming a song
The song turned into into a chant that flew to heaven
Where God was and is today
Waiting for searching souls, that he will never abandon.

Monkey, goose, bull, snake and lou
Before God stood, looking blue
'Have you anything to say? '
But only silence crossed their lips
'Listen closely to what I have to say.'

'Only I know the way
Only I, for I am the way
Only through me can there be a way.'
And only by my gift of salvation
Can you stay.'

Submitted: Monday, July 16, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, January 13, 2015

Topic of this poem: God

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Comments about this poem (Monkey and Goose, Snake and Bull, and Tiger Lou by Midnights Voice )

  • Rookie - 58 Points Brian Jani (6/28/2014 5:19:00 PM)

    this one deserves sharing , well done man. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Constance K Yost (9/16/2012 11:28:00 PM)

    When he darkened his eyes. I just knew somebody was going to be sorry! You have woven a wonderful lesson into a fantastic poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,411 Points * Sunprincess * (9/8/2012 2:34:00 PM)

    Love God's message...hope everyone pays attention.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,070 Points Diane Hine (7/27/2012 8:13:00 PM)

    No matter what one's beliefs, it's still a wonderful story! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (7/16/2012 9:46:00 PM)

    Great story. Lots of though and dialogue in this type of poem.
    Lots of characters to keep happy, before they all kill each other.
    Skillful write.
    I invite you to read, Jungle Morning, Jungle Dance. (Report) Reply

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