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Peter Shea


~~Night Sweats~~


You never came home
Sitting alone in my room
Love’s sweet betrayal
Hope shatters like fine crystal
Shards puncture heart – I bleed out…

Submitted: Monday, November 28, 2005

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  • Rookie Joseph Harskamp (9/26/2006 1:24:00 PM)

    ok, sentiment is there, but its the expression of it that counts. it is much harder to get your point across with a short poem such as this. i would recommend re-writing it, adding about...umm....lets say 3 stanza's. this has potential. lets see it. (Report) Reply

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