*** Take Me With You *** Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

*** Take Me With You ***

Rating: 4.2


Dusk chasing the lazy dawn
Sounds of angry skies deafening
Lightning, like a giant snapshot
Blinding your eyes to madness
Rains fiercely flooding the downhill pond
The slippery path ruining
Mind halts desires getting bold
Vision cuffs to the onus

I saw you standing near to Heaven pane
Gazing at sizzling droplets
As martyr as your teardrops
You smile a deadly blossom
The pink Satin garment you wore slain
My heart into pieces
Don’t kill me now my heartthrob
My death isn’t awesome


Is there any other love in you?
Betrayal is the word for sinner
Remember my promises?
I will hang my neck to your flawless hair
Decapitating my head for your moo
Enhancing your voices to purer
Disjointing my legs for I couldn’t run less
Making us the most corrupted pair

Take me with you
The singing stars will guide us to eternity
Rainbows will render us a lift
The earth our magic carpet
Eyes of diamond blue
Grab my souls grab my insanity
My blood clogs and my veins stiff
I’m frozen to your instinct parapet

Take me with you
We could write off the blues
Blood in blood
Love in red
Don’t let me watching you breathing
For the last time
Ever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cherish Bernstein 27 November 2008

wow this is an amzing poem...read mines

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Jay Jay 27 November 2008

Wow this is really good take a look at my first tell me what you think.

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Mohammed Albalushi 27 November 2008

good one, keep writing lovely poem

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Alisia Bonnick 27 November 2008

I love the way you blend love and disaster in this poem...almost as if they're one in the same.

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Rehab Helmy 28 November 2008

it's so great. I 'm not online a lot because of my work so I didn't see it when added. I like all the images u put especially: The singing stars will guide us to eternity good luck thanks for informing me about ur new writings & take care

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Exasperation 22 December 2019

Life is just not Fair...just square

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Alex Tedeschi 18 December 2008

Wow! Really good =) I like it.

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Naidz Ladia 09 December 2008

this is really nice...i love this poem...I REALLY LIKE THIS..

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Eunice Ogunleye 03 December 2008

'Is there any other love in you? Betrayal is the word for sinner Remember my promises? I will hang my neck to your flawless hair Decapitating my head for your moo Enhancing your voices to purer Disjointing my legs for I couldn’t run less Making us the most corrupted pair' This part really caught my attention. I loved every bit of the poem I'd rather be gone than live life without love.

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Egi David Perdana 30 November 2008

you are no 1 sensei I not doubt! ! ! !

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