Violet Eztli

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One Of Those Nights - Poem by Violet Eztli

Its just one of those nights
where you feel
that even the moon herself
is contemplating her very existence

Its just one of those nights
where you stare at the ceiling
and stare at the dancing shadows
of the trees against the moon

Its just one of those nights
where you feel alone
Where you feel as if your room
is the only room in the entire universe

Its just one of those nights
where you don’t fall asleep
but you do indeed dream
Where you don’t have any thoughts
but you do indeed think

Its just one of those nights
where you don’t feel any pain
but you do indeed cry

Topic(s) of this poem: nights


Comments about One Of Those Nights by Violet Eztli

  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (1/10/2016 2:59:00 PM)

    Its just one of those nights
    where you feel alone
    Where you feel as if your room
    is the only room in the entire universe

    but you indeed cry. thinking, cogitating, sadness, tears, heavings, sobbing. all part of life. in lonely moments we all experience this. you have pictured it very well in simplicity. thank you very much. tony (Report) Reply

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  • Terry Craddock Terry Craddock (5/4/2015 6:07:00 AM)

    'Its just one of those nights' what a beautiful line to start a poem from and repeat stanza by stanza, the first stanza

    Its just one of those nights
    where you feel
    that even the moon herself
    is contemplating her very existence

    yes every stanza is either beautifully crafted or intrigue 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Herbert Guitang Herbert Guitang (4/24/2014 8:44:00 PM)

    Its just one of those nights
    where you don’t feel any pain
    but you do indeed cry

    I LOVE EVERY LINES AND STANZAS (Report) Reply

  • V P Mahur V P Mahur (3/31/2014 2:35:00 PM)

    Dear Alena,
    Love and nice imagery. Keep it up
    Thanks and please reply (Report) Reply

  • Colleen Courtney (3/30/2014 1:39:00 PM)

    Love this piece! ! ! ! Had me from the first beautiful stanza! Very nicely done and has been added to my list of favorites! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 30, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 1, 2014


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