**poet Laureate Visits Battle Field Comments

The work of the arms has not good workers.

hi sadiq...aakum i am atonce reminded of the closing remarks /dedication of RAMBO-111... i am not sure which...but it is instructive 'dedicated to the brave people of Afganistan' these words haunted the colonialists then they haunt them now...what on earth is a poet going to do... Aha...iv heard that before...the pen is mightier than the sword....but alas its tip is beaten into place by a thousand scimitars and through its ugly phalic form flows the blood of innocents too you touched a raw nerve there excellent write...its atenner cheers

Writing for a price on somebody's miseries...yes, Sadiq...even war tragedies are commercialized now a days...a thoughtful write...10

A poetic tribute to the great poet......writing the real situations of life...Instead of pictures and videos, making documentaries through poems...........fabulous share! 10+++

The word warrior embattled its way through poetic path that rained down bullets of hope to the soldiers in action.Great piece Sadiq.

last four lines were excellent..............well done

What price is yours for writing my miseries When you shall recite to the world my wounds With mock sadness holding your breath With high colors you shall display the laurels........................I'll call them predators who feed themselves on human miseries.............A Good Write.........

A Poet Laureate is a poet officially appointed by a government and is often expected to compose poems for State occasions and other government events..your piece is not a fallacy, it expresses real situation as shown and written in this piece of yours, , , naizz

A very thoughtful piece Sadiqullah...brilliant write....10+++