Ali Sabry

Rookie - 139 Points (11/8/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

- - - Princes Was A Dream Girl Day & Night- - - - Poem by Ali Sabry

Princes was a dream girl day and night
Reminded me listening to the song of moonlight

I still can feel the taste of traditional food
Your love was my shadow i pronounce as a cap hood

Smile with hidden tears every night
Regret became your host, now its too late for fight

I wont give up of writing articles even accusing me again
I smile when I remember calling you, you don't have brain

Where are all food and the way you were making it with me
Its all gone, its just a shame, I cannt see you anymore next to me


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Comments about - - - Princes Was A Dream Girl Day & Night- - - by Ali Sabry

  • Bronze Star - 2,294 Points Kewayne Wadley (4/16/2015 4:43:00 PM)

    Excellent writing here, you have a gift sir! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Mervyn Graham (3/3/2014 6:55:00 AM)

    Where are all food and the way you were making it with me

    I have to ask what this line means especially Where are all food

    Apart from that as others have said the starting lines are good. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 385 Points Jeri Martindale (1/21/2014 6:41:00 PM)

    Soory she made u feel that way, good inspiration for your writing though. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Messaoud Allalouche (1/10/2014 10:10:00 AM)

    I like this one, it's very good poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bobby Yadav (12/24/2013 10:28:00 PM)

    Smile with hidden tears every night
    Regret became your host, now its too late for fight.
    The above line is so wonderful and well explained, what a imagery a true talent. thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vien Tran (11/8/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    It's really romantic one...
    I love Smile with hidden tears every night. Regret became your host, now its too late for fight so much... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 23, 2013


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