Elizabeth Rebel

Rookie (March 02,1989 / New Jersey)

Snow White Transparent - Poem by Elizabeth Rebel

“Mirror… Mirror…”

Snow White stops
Looks down at
Her hand
Perfectly pale
Unblemished
Young and
Innocent
But damned
So damned
The wicked
Woman knew
Smiled and knew

“This is what you want”

Hands her the
Apple, poisoned
And red
No one knew
That Snow White
Knew, knew
The Truth
No one
Suspects her
Not Snow White
Pure, perfect
Snow White

“Mirror… Mirror…”

A brush bristles
Through her hair
Snow White looks
At her reflection
In the Mirror
Her mirror
The Wicked
Woman’s mirror
Snow White’s
Image smiles
Sadly at her
No hope left

“On the wall…”

He comes in
Princely in
His ways
Snow White does
Not look at
Him, not at him
Oh no
She cannot
She resents him
It is not apples
That are poisoned
But lips

“Snow…? ”

Without words
She undresses
Revealing glorious
Pale body
His to touch
Snow White
Watches his hands
Lower and closes
Her eyes
This is not love
Love is not—
Love is

“Seven little men…”

She falls into the
Dark corners of
Her mind
Where poison
Still chokes her
And there is
Nothing but
Death and silence
Oh, for the silence
Snow White turns
To look at The Mirror
And asks:

“Who is fairest of them all? ”


Comments about Snow White Transparent by Elizabeth Rebel

  • Rookie - 40 Points Suchoon Mo (8/13/2006 1:04:00 AM)

    very well crafted. a poem with a discipline. (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
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  • Rookie Goldy Locks (6/28/2006 12:02:00 AM)

    i liked how you interrupted the dialogue with description. that was excellent. & we
    have the same birthday! keep 'em coming, Elizabeth. you have a great style. Sus (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 21, 2005



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