Anthony Di'anno

Bronze Star - 2,804 Points (Yorkshire)

Summer Winds - Poem by Anthony Di'anno

Echo rippled running water leaping,
Baize of loosely littered emerald rocks,
Spilling grass margins as light winds sweeping,
Chimes loose from swaying dandelion clocks,

Timeless summer stretches long dappled paths,
There to lure explorers along their way,
Birdsong floats abroad sunlit scented wafts,
Of pure excitement drifting through the day,

Gently teasing hair, skin, fur, feather leaf,
Bringing forth the hint of a balmy night,
Stoking stars strewn above the fires beneath,
Where shadows dance around flickering light,

The winds of Summer travel far and wide,
'Till they become gentle sighs breathed outside.

Topic(s) of this poem: Nature

Comments about Summer Winds by Anthony Di'anno

  • Rookie - 343 Points F. J. Thomas (7/31/2014 2:02:00 PM)

    You've woven a beautifully peaceful setting here Anthony. It makes you long for that moment. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 4,678 Points Valerie Dohren (6/24/2014 1:51:00 PM)

    Lovely poem Anthony, beautifully descriptive. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (6/22/2014 8:06:00 AM)

    Lovely summer poem. Your summer poem is flowing so gently with wonderful flow of rhythms. Especially at the peak of summer I just wonder when the summer will get over and wait for rainy season. But your summer poem give a cooling effect...Loved the way you presented it beautifully. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Kanav Justa (6/16/2014 2:51:00 AM)

    not very often do we see an abab rhyme scheme written with such a precision, , , wonderful work you have done here, , (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,112 Points Diane Hine (6/15/2014 3:59:00 AM)

    I've just spent some weeks in Ireland; summer there is beautiful and just as you describe in this lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Daniel Brick (6/14/2014 12:15:00 PM)

    Hi Anthony This is a superb Summer Poem! I was hiking through a huge urban park called LEBANON HILLS REGIONAL PARK yesterday and I now realize your line described the walk, the surroundings, the mood - everything is there in that line TIMELESS SUMMER STRETCHES LONG DAPPLED PATHS. Everyone acknowledges the weakest part of a Shakespearean sonnet is the closing couplet, but not here - it's such a mellow and lovely image. And it brings the poem to a satisfying closure since the winds which blow insistently for 12 lines have quieted. And that quieting is also what the reader feels inside. It's so rich and moving! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,034 Points Leah Ayliffe (6/12/2014 1:33:00 PM)

    I love the summer feels in this. Makes me smile! Good write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 12, 2014

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