(July 15,1999 / Barinas)

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The Arise Of Dawn

Waking up at the arise of dawn, such a beautiful temptation,
It's so pretty it's so long, this gorgeous creation.
Reds blues whites, sweet magnificence of the sky,
Sparkling lead misty lies little dreams, forget the night.

This Twilight is my show of polar lights, in the early morning in the late night,
It is my wings it is my flight, it is never closing it is tonight.
Throw your worries away, for the sun starts to shine this day,
Ask God to show you the way, and smell the scent of the flowers in May.

Open your door, and appreciate beauty for a second,
Let your colors burst, in this charming deflection.
Sit in the green fresh lawn, and think why is the sky blue,
It's the arise of dawn, it is YOU!

Submitted: Saturday, February 02, 2013
Edited: Monday, February 04, 2013

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Open the four-caged walls that trap you,
And appreciate the sky.
If you didn't have a ceiling,
Guess what, you still have the sky.

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  • Connor Whyte (2/7/2013 6:25:00 PM)

    Good write good use of words

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  • Thomas Cox (2/6/2013 6:57:00 PM)

    a very inspiring write...

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  • Scarlett Cleo Nightingale (2/4/2013 7:13:00 PM)

    Wow... this.. IS A GREAT POEM! ! IT MADE ME SMILE! I love it! Perfect way to describe... well... everything! Wonderful! Such a nice poem!

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  • Emy Luvsnyancat (2/4/2013 6:12:00 PM)

    This is great! Really reflective of the beauty of the world and stuff ^_^
    And thanks for checking out some of my poems, I work hard on them: P

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  • ~~ Lyda ~~ (2/4/2013 6:07:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem! Beautiful dawn makes life worth living. Keep on writing. You got talent 4 sure.10+

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  • Titi Dale (2/2/2013 3:17:00 PM)

    Great poem, Lu :) this is great! You express many things without giving too much away, and so you still leave some questions.

    Titi

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  • Gajanan Mishra (2/2/2013 5:38:00 AM)

    arise of dawn. and sit in green fresh lawn. good one.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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