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The Paradise Within

Everything starts from within.
Within us there is a place,
Place within us dwells a person.
Person within us acts as a baby,
A baby that befriends laughter.

Laughter, the greatest Doctor.
Doctor that nurses with smile.
Smile and let there be laughter
Laughter is the music to our soul,
Music makes us dance

Dancing is the symptom of happiness;
Happiness is the paradise
Paradise is built within our heart
When the heart smiles and laughs,
Paradise regained

Submitted: Thursday, January 05, 2012
Edited: Friday, January 06, 2012


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  • T-ebi Jemine (6/3/2012 4:19:00 AM)

    @ Aron, thank you. Very encouraging.

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  • Aron Oddi (6/2/2012 10:47:00 PM)

    I like this poem very much, bravo well thought out

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