Aminath Neena

Rookie - 157 Points (Male')

The Poem


Let me cross this river
over the bridge
along the wedge
of cherry blossoms
Let me chant a melody
through the collage
of nostalgic moments
below the tavern
Of seasonal sonnets
let me sail this barge
amidst the tentacles
of fidgeting doubts
Beneath the blue canopy
of rumbling thoughts
smudged in rhapsody
with this brush
Let me paint this caravan
in white crispy gold
Through these obstacles
let me - just let me
behold my poet-

For I am his POEM.

Submitted: Friday, October 07, 2011
Edited: Wednesday, April 16, 2014
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Topic of this poem: nostalgia


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  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (11/13/2011 10:08:00 PM)

    Amazing! What a beautiful and soothing write that clearly shows your potential in the Poetry World! 10+++ Thank you for sharing! Keep inspiring the World with more such talented works! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City... (Report) Reply

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