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There Was A Door..

There Was A Door..

thinking of Thou, where Thou might be
remembering Thou, so Thou remember Me
ah! this  life.. so short,
why it must end?
i want Thou to remember,
remembering Thou and Me..

the Door to which Thou found no key
the Veil through which I could not see
alas! they talked of Thou and Me
for a while,
then  they remembered
no talks
of  Me and
Thee..

Submitted: Thursday, February 19, 2009


Comments about this poem (There Was A Door.. by Ra'ana Dilruba Yasmin Ra'ana Dilruba Yasmin )

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  • Farzana Naina (4/6/2009 10:23:00 AM)

    Wonderful, you are using the full strenth of words in such powerful poems.

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  • ata khan (2/26/2009 8:00:00 AM)

    Eloquent,
    Musical and
    stylish writing

    Thanks for sharing 10+

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