abdoul aziz fatty

Rookie (03/03/91 / brikama)

To Her Lost Glory - Poem by abdoul aziz fatty


The promise land long preserved
And the light she deserved
In the ocean we swim to cumb
With iron hand lady you comb

From those pure isolated day
To the beat of the drum the way
Men of vices and zero responsibilities
Their pitiless eye rotate with inabilities

The lost glory deeply I cry
In the dark moon shall I mourn
Voices bent to let bast try
In the dark moon till morn'

The great weak lady yes, you shall
But with resistance the first the last to boys.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

a very respectful and responsible girl who lost her glory(virginity) after long days of resistance.however a very foolish boy made her lost her glory.

Comments about To Her Lost Glory by abdoul aziz fatty

  • Freshman - 946 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (4/15/2013 11:34:00 AM)

    A touching poem from a lovely heart.! GREAT! (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,358 Points Ruby Mostazir (4/11/2013 5:47:00 AM)

    KEEP WRITING......... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,541 Points Babatunde Aremu (4/10/2013 4:02:00 AM)

    Nice poem. You have succeeded in bringing to fore what our teenagers past through. Keep writing. Pls read my poems and make comments (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 29 Points Ketan Hukare (4/9/2013 6:48:00 AM)

    You are fabulous, my pal. Indeed! ! !
    Your poem touched my heart....... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 10, 2013

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