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Clara Odelia Ciutara


True Friend - Letter To A Friend


I could feel how loneliness kills
And I might be feeling the way it had been again
Just if I hadn’t met you and your sweet smile

You, a friend that God has let me
To have, to share, to keep, and to love
Being with you makes me believe in my long lost self

And your smile, a gift that reminds me
That tomorrow still remains
And miracle does exist

You make me feel a sweet togetherness
That heals the wound created by the loneliness
And let me see a new day that comes every day

But girl, I know one day we’ll have a farewell
And when the day comes
I believe I would be feeling the loneliness again
And I know it’s worse than before
Because I ever felt a sweet togetherness with you
But until the time comes,
I’ll be always keeping your smile in my mind
Cause I believe it would heal me
And be a new faith in my life

Even though we’re separated,
I’ll never forget each memory we have
Cause they will remain as ever as our friendship

Submitted: Thursday, July 08, 2010
Edited: Friday, July 08, 2011

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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (7/30/2010 3:17:00 AM)

    You, a friend that God has let me
    To have, to share, to keep, and to love
    Being with you makes me believe in my long lost self

    And your smile, a gift that reminds me
    That tomorrow still remains
    And miracle does exist

    You make me feel a sweet togetherness
    That heals the wound created by the loneliness
    And let me see a new day that comes every day

    ur thoughts on friendship and togetherness is so fine and good.we all need friends. we are social beings. without friends we cannot live. such a great truth you have written. thank you.. (Report) Reply

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