Elien Seys

What You Do To Me - Poem by Elien Seys

You're making me sink
Deeper and deeper
Staring in the dark
Suicidal thoughts screaming
Louder and louder
Staring in the dark
My body getting
Colder and colder
Staring in the dark
The blood streaming
Faster and faster
Staring in the dark

Comments about What You Do To Me by Elien Seys

  • Gold Star - 8,547 Points Is It Poetry (11/28/2013 12:21:00 PM)

    Into the dark where we wait.
    Into the light few will find.
    Into each heart, beating apart.
    Into one mind love is fine.....iip (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 7,949 Points Tiku . (11/25/2013 10:00:00 AM)

    very nice.sad and me feel related. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 26, 2013

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