i love you baby was all she sed with her finger on the trigger and the gun to her head,
she..pulled..bk..her..finger..and..bang..she...was..dead,
None..of..the..troubles..floating..around,
as..she..lay..breathless..lying..on..the..ground,
...
mummy..where's..daddy? ..hes..been..gone..so..long,
mummy..the..teacher..keeps..asking..if..im..ok,
mummy..wats..going..on?
...
this..girl..has..been..blinded..too..long
This..girls..pain...does..her...harm
she..looks..in..the..mirror
but..dosnt..recongise..the..person..looking..back
...
I.am.12.years.old.and.although.i.never.new.how.much.i.liked.writing.poetry.i.would.appreciate.it.if.you.could.give.pointers.on.how.to.improve.them.thank.you!)
Your Fault
i love you baby was all she sed with her finger on the trigger and the gun to her head,
she..pulled..bk..her..finger..and..bang..she...was..dead,
None..of..the..troubles..floating..around,
as..she..lay..breathless..lying..on..the..ground,
Looking..down..from..the..sky,
Her..boyfriend..gave..a..giant..cry,
As..she..hurt..herself..one..step..too..far,
He..was..left..with..the..scar,
knowing..it..was..his..fault..she..was..gone,
He..had..hurt..her..and..she..had..kept..it..so..long,
But..now..she..couldnt..speak..a..word,
All..that..had..happened..was..so..ubsurbed,
But..now..it..was..too..little..too..late,
She..was..suicidal..and..just..culdnt..wait,
So..next..tyme..when..you..say..sumthin..bad,
Just..imagen..that..person..feeling..lonley..and..sad!