sophie white

Rookie (05/01/95 / bristol, soutmead)

Your Fault


i love you baby was all she sed with her finger on the trigger and the gun to her head,
she..pulled..bk..her..finger..and..bang..she. ..was..dead,
None..of..the..troubles..floating..around,
as..she..lay..breathless..lying..on..the..gro und,
Looking..down..from..the..sky,
Her..boyfriend..gave..a..giant..cry,
As..she..hurt..herself..one..step..too..far,
He..was..left..with..the..scar,
knowing..it..was..his..fault..she..was..gone,
He..had..hurt..her..and..she..had..kept..it.. so..long,
But..now..she..couldnt..speak..a..word,
All..that..had..happened..was..so..ubsurbed,
But..now..it..was..too..little..too..late,
She..was..suicidal..and..just..culdnt..wait,
So..next..tyme..when..you..say..sumthin..bad,
Just..imagen..that..person..feeling..lonley.. and..sad!

Submitted: Monday, April 09, 2007
Edited: Saturday, February 12, 2011

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Comments about this poem (Your Fault by sophie white )

  • Rookie Fred Johnson (4/10/2007 11:27:00 AM)

    it was very well written but confusing with the misspelled words...peace out (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raynette Eitel (4/9/2007 10:30:00 AM)

    Sophie, you have a strong poem but the words you used are so badly spelled that it takes away from your verse. Words are a poet's tools. Just as a carpenter will not use rusty tools, poets should work hard to use good spelling. You can show the speaker's poverty-stricken plight in life without misspelling her words.

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