sophie white

Rookie (05/01/95 / bristol, soutmead)

Your Fault

i love you baby was all she sed with her finger on the trigger and the gun to her head,
she..pulled..bk..her..finger..and..bang..she. ..was..dead,
as..she..lay..breathless..lying..on..the..gro und,,
He..was..left..with..the..scar,, so..long,,,,
Just..imagen..that..person..feeling..lonley.. and..sad!

Submitted: Monday, April 09, 2007
Edited: Saturday, February 12, 2011

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Comments about this poem (Your Fault by sophie white )

  • Rookie Fred Johnson (4/10/2007 11:27:00 AM)

    it was very well written but confusing with the misspelled words...peace out (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raynette Eitel (4/9/2007 10:30:00 AM)

    Sophie, you have a strong poem but the words you used are so badly spelled that it takes away from your verse. Words are a poet's tools. Just as a carpenter will not use rusty tools, poets should work hard to use good spelling. You can show the speaker's poverty-stricken plight in life without misspelling her words.

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