Venus Fire

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Hi, I'm a 16 year old girl that likes writing/reading poems once in a while (:
I'm not very good at what I write might seem like it's at a lower level, but I like it so I write it! : D more »

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On My Way To School (Ballad Attempt)

It was a pleasant day
walking down the road
too bad it's so early
carrying a heavy load
on my way to school

As I walk down the same street
taking in what I see
quiet birds are flying by
as if they want to flee
on my way to school

then I see a body
lying on the ground
looking cold and brittle
its face showing a frown
on my way to school

I get to the ravine
and smell the fresh air
and hearing the running water
thinking life is fair
on my way to school

I arrive at my goal
tired as can be
the day has only ...

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