clawdea benat

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call me claudge. im 23 years old. i love to write. and i aim to write a story. more »

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  • Rookie - 105 Points Bharat Liberty (1/14/2015 5:47:00 AM)

    i loved the way you expressed feelings sounds really happened

  • Rookie - 1 Points Doris Cornago (12/20/2013 9:38:00 PM)

    Hi Clawdea. I am glad to have known you through your poem. These are my favorite lines:

    this dark side that i kept fighting for so long
    that's just it, its all been there
    and has nothing to do with any other human

    Nobody can impose on you, or make you do things not comfortable or meaningful. A human being is complete all by himself/herself. I share this feeling, but also, that I need someone, and so must tell him, even if hopeless. I do not want to be bored with myself - it is best to be bored with somebody, and leave when boredom sets in. What if I get bored with myself?

    So, there, can you see the impracticality of having one's self for company all of the time? Can you tolerate mine? I would be most honored. Poetry is a good place to start a writing career. A story gets easier once you master the flow of emotions and rhythm of language. I suggest you try a story instead of a poem when the inspiration comes. I am a novelist before becoming a poet. You can see my first novel in, The Spirit of Things, an outsourced piece.

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Best Poem of clawdea benat

Silent Hill

The silence of the wind
the moving head of the chicken
hungry of the dog
in my grandpas's home

appreciate me to feel the nature of thy mountain

the silence of the grass
the remain of the past
echo of the children playing
creep my ear saying
'how great is thy place'

and closing my eyes
feeling every peacefulness and quietness
of this land where i was once belong.

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