clawdea benat

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call me claudge. im 23 years old. i love to write. and i aim to write a story. more »

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  • Rookie - 105 Points Bharat Liberty (1/14/2015 5:47:00 AM)

    i loved the way you expressed feelings sounds really happened

  • Rookie - 1 Points Doris Cornago (12/20/2013 9:38:00 PM)

    Hi Clawdea. I am glad to have known you through your poem. These are my favorite lines:

    this dark side that i kept fighting for so long
    that's just it, its all been there
    and has nothing to do with any other human

    Nobody can impose on you, or make you do things not comfortable or meaningful. A human being is complete all by himself/herself. I share this feeling, but also, that I need someone, and so must tell him, even if hopeless. I do not want to be bored with myself - it is best to be bored with somebody, and leave when boredom sets in. What if I get bored with myself?

    So, there, can you see the impracticality of having one's self for company all of the time? Can you tolerate mine? I would be most honored. Poetry is a good place to start a writing career. A story gets easier once you master the flow of emotions and rhythm of language. I suggest you try a story instead of a poem when the inspiration comes. I am a novelist before becoming a poet. You can see my first novel in amazon.com, The Spirit of Things, an outsourced piece.

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Oh Hell Thee, Praise You Highest Preacher On Earth

i signaled my men
come come you're weary eye
wipe that tears from your hands
the storm will came, all the devils will die
come come my oppress children for they make you rugs
i will make them ash
come come oh pitiful beauty of eden
innocent child broken by bandits
may we come what may
my punishments starting to rise
and so stand up and fight this innocence inside of you
be strong, dont fade like me
im dead, nobody cares.
im still living with this side of bright God had make it
realize not because a person dies so her soul too.

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